I’m trying to do this to earn a scholarship can anybody critic it so it can be really good?? PLEASE!!?
Though I do many volunteer projects each year my favorite one is (my service). During my summer I go and spend one week at (my church), we are completely devoted to not only fixing someone’s house but also changing life’s while we do it. We transform houses that are owned by under privileged and disabled people in our own community and we go in and do things from re-doing roofs, painting, and putting new tile in. We work from 8:00 am to 4:00 pm and than we go back to the church and have closing devotional
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I hope this helps! I don’t mean to change everything around, and what you wrote before was completely fine, but this flows better and lets the person reading the essay know that you actually got something out of the volunteering experience.
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