A few days ago
Anonymous

Essay Help!?

I Am 13, Year 8, Need Help on writing an essay on the homeless, 7 paragraphs, 750 words, need help on what do put in each paragraph and so on! any help would be much appreciated!

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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you could structure your paragraphs like this:

1. introduction: information about homelessness in Britain (assuming ur british?), statistics, percentages etc.

2. Reasons for homelessness, drug use, etc.

3. Living conditions for homeless people

4. Charities that help homeless

5. Prejudice against homeless people, you could include quotes from people you know (just make them up!)

6. Story of a celebrity that was homeless, and now sucessful

7. Sum it up, write about how the problem could be improved, employment etc.

*link the paragraphs with However, Although, stuff like that*

* for a really first class essay, talk about sources (where you got your info from), opinions of yourself and others.*

good luck, i hate essays 😛

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A few days ago
Empress1
I’m not sure which angle you are going to take with your essay but here are some topics you can use: Talk about how homelessness is a vicious cycle – usually homeless people are not employed (thus they tend to migrate). In order to apply for a job, they need to have an address and/or a phone number where they can be reached. If they don’t have a place they can be reached at or a way to be reached, how can they get a job? I also believe they can’t apply for state benefits without listing residency or a phone number.

The amount of homeless people has increased (you need to look up the actual statistic – I don’t know it) and we tend to spend more money on foreign aid then we do our own citizens. Illegal immigrants can come here and get free health care, food, state subsidies but our own American homeless are forgotten. Elaborate on how a lot of the homeless we see are vets and rather than being treated with respect, they are all but forgotten.

You can also talk about how now, with subprime mortgates, interest only loans, payday loans, etc., more and more are on the cusp of losing everything – whole families whose parents bit off more than they could chew are now going to pay the consequences. Hope this helps – good luck with your essay!

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A few days ago
Anonymous
hi there,

take a look at this: http://www.ielts-exam.net/index.php?option=com_content&task=category§ionid=7&id=15&Itemid=28

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