A few days ago
snowday

check my grammar plz..!!?

our teacher wants us to write a summary n a theme about this play called “The Miracle Worker” (which is a play about helen keller)

im an esl, and i dont want my grade to get lower because of my grammar mistakes,

so can anyone grade my grammar

This play is talk about a child name Helen Keller, who becames a blind after six months of birth because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller then write a litter to this famous oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist send Annie Sullivan to teach Helen. Helen was a spoiled child who is wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. But Miss. Sullican does not gave up on her, after numerous struggles between two of them, Miss Sullivan successfully taught Helen to have a good manner. And she also taught Helen language by using hand to feel each alphabet. Event though it tooks a long time to let this miracle happen, but Helen finally realized that everything has a name.

Theme

people should not relinquish on their goals.

Sometimes, a miracle can happen if you have enough confident.

People should always give a try, even on things they think is impossible.

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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These are the corrections I would make. I’ve rewritten it with them:

This play is about a child name Helen Keller, who becomes blind at six months old because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller writes a letter to Dr. Chisholm, a famous oculist in Baltimore. Dr. Chisholm sends Annie Sullivan to teach Helen. Helen is a spoiled child who is wild, obstinate, and hard to teach, but Miss Sullivan does not give up on her. After numerous struggles between the two of them, Miss Sullivan successfully teaches Helen good manners as well as language by using her hands to feel each letter of the alphabet. It takes a long time to let this miracle happen, but Helen finally realizes that everything has a name.

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A few days ago
justme
this play talks about a child named helen keller who becomes blind at six months old. after aunt ev’s auggestion, mr keller writes a letter to a famous oculist in baltimore, dr chisholm. the oculist sends annie aullivan to teach helen.

helen was a spoiled child who was wilf, obstinate, and hard ot teach. but miss sullivan does not give up on her, ever after numerous struggles between the two of them. eventually miss sullivan successfully taught helen good manners. she also taught helen language by using hands to feel each letter of the alphabet. even though it took a long time for this miracle to happen, helen finally realized that everything has a name.

people should not relinquish their goals. a miracle can happen if you have enough confidence. people should always try, even if they think it is impossible.

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A few days ago
Mary
i fixed it here ^-^

This play is talk about a child name Helen Keller, who becomes a blind after six months of birth because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller then writes a litter to this famous oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist sends Annie Sullivan to teach Helen. Helen was a spoiled child who is wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. But Miss. Sullican does not give up on her, after numerous struggles between two of them, Miss Sullivan successfully taught Helen to have a good manner. And she also taught Helen language by using hand to feel each alphabet. Event though it took a long time to let this miracle happen, but Helen finally realized that everything has a name.

Theme

people should not relinquish on their goals.

Sometimes, a miracle can happen if you have enough confident.

People should always give a try, even on things they think is impossible.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
ive made the corrections.

This play is about a child name Helen Keller, who becomes blind after six months of birth because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller then writes a letter to a famous oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist then sends Annie Sullivan to teach Helen.

Helen was a spoiled child who was wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. But Miss Sullivan did not give up on her, and after numerous struggles between the two of them, Miss Sullivan successfully taught Helen to have good manners. She also taught Helen language by using sign language and then having Helen feel the letters in her hand. Event though it took a long time to let this miracle happen, Helen finally realized that everything has a name.

Theme

People should not relinquish on their goals.

Sometimes a miracle can happen if you have enough confidence.

People should always try things, even things they think are impossible.

just copy and paste it back onto word or whatever program u r using πŸ™‚

good job πŸ™‚

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A few days ago
Anonymous
This play is talk about a child name Helen Keller, who becames a blind after six months of birth because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller then wrote a letter to this famous oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist send Annie Sullivan to teach Helen.

Helen was a spoiled child who is wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. However Miss. Sullican does not gave up on her, after numerous struggles between two of them, she successfully taught Helen to have a good manner. She also taught Helen how to red brail. Even though it took a long time to let this miracle happen, Helen finally realized that everything has a name.

well i edited most of it and i really hope this wasnt a joke i mean im not saying it was poor but you couldve done better with the rough draft and i hope it was a rough draft because if it isnt then you just wasted my coffee break… err im in highschool i dont have coffee breaks lol hehhe but anywho (lol) you should copy the paragraph i wrote it will be more concrete but you did a good job though

Theme

people should not relinquish on their goals.

Sometimes, a miracle can happen if you have enough confident.

People should always give a try, even on things they think is impossible

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A few days ago
tazdoll16
This play is about a child named Helen Keller, who became blind after six months of birth because of an illness. After Aunt Ev.’s suggestion, Mr. Keller then wrote a letter to this famous oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist sent Annie Sullivan to teach Helen a way to communicate.

Helen was a spoiled child who was wild, obstinate, and hard to teach. But Miss Sullivan did not give up on her, even after numerous struggles between two of them. Miss Sullivan successfully taught Helen to have good manners. She also taught Helen language by using her hand to feel each letter in the alphabet. Even though it took a long time to let this miracle happen, Helen finally realized that everything has a name.

Theme

People should not relinquish on their goals.

Sometimes, a miracle can happen if you have enough confidence.

People should always try, even on things they think are impossible.

___________

Hope this helps.

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A few days ago
kellieanne h
tons of errors!!!

it should read

This play talks about a child named Helen Keller, who became blind six months after she was born due to illness. After Aunt Ev’s suggestion,Mr. Keller then writes a letter to a famous Oculist in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm. The oculist sent Annie Sullivan to teach Hellen,she was a spoiled child whom was wild,obstinate and hard to teach. But Miss Sullican does not give up trying to teach her. After many struggles she was able to teach her. Good manners,language by hand,touching the alphabet. Even though it takes a long time, the miracle happened. Teaching her everything has a name.

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5 years ago
?
Capitalize “It” in the second sentence. It should be “an innovation” not “a innovation.” That was a way obvious mistake that I saw, but besides that I didn’t see anything. I think you may repeat the same words too many times though. Try using variety, but great job! πŸ™‚
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A few days ago
Bob
There is about 4 mistakes. They are all in the wrong tense.
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