A few days ago
Please revise this sentence?
You have shown me I am safe to fully be myself with you, and share my feelings.
I think its grammatically correct but I want to make it sound better. I want to use another word in place of shown, is shown or showed right, and don’t know if I need to use “with you” but would sentence sound right without it? DO NOT want to use the word “shown” This sentence is in response to my boyfriend 33 being understanding about what is bothering me. Please revise this with sentence with another word INSTEAD of shown and rewritten with proper grammar, I wnat it changed, thanks
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A few days ago
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“You have allowed to feel safe and to be myself with you, and that I can share everything with you. ”
its perfect like that
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A few days ago
You’ve demonstrated that it’s safe to be myself with you, and that I can share my feelings.
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