A few days ago
Anonymous

which is a better thesis?

People should not get tattoos as an outcome of today’s fashion. In doing so, people are going to face various negative tattoo stigmas that could affect your social and economical status. People would eventually get tired of the fashion fever of tattoos and have to go through double the pain if removed

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People should not get tattoos to improve their body image.

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A few days ago
mclass920

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honestly i don’t like either one because i have two tattoos and I’m working on 3 and 4. but the better is People should not get tattoos to improve their body image.

i get tattoos for me not what other people think. a person’s idea of body image is opinion. People should get tattoos for themselves only.

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A few days ago
septicalfrogs
The first is better as a thesis because it is not as open wide as the second one. You make a clear cut statement with the first!
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A few days ago
Anonymous
The first one…its very descriptive, and you will have most of your intoduction complete wit that one.
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