A few days ago
Cindy L

pls help to proofread my eng?

Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Ken. It’s such an honor to be here today. I’m going to play a recorder today. I’ve been studying recorder for two years. The song I’m playing today is called, “Old Clock.” I hope everyone will enjoy it as much as I do. Thank you all for being here today.

pls help me to proofread my writing. I was hoping to write few more sentences… but out of ideas><.... can someone help me? or rewrite an example to show me how to write this? I'm thinking about 10-15 sentences.

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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A better sounding one would be:

“Good evening ladies and gentlemen.I’m Ken and I’m greatly honored to have you as my audience this evening.I am going to play a recorder, an instrument which I have been studying for two years. The song I’m about to play is called “Old Clock”,and I enjoy it very much. I hope you all enjoy it as much as I do.”

You could include a brief introduction to the recorder as well

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A few days ago
firebolt
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A few days ago
Anonymous
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http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/general/gl_edit.html

http://www.englishindex.com/

http://www.grammar101.com/

http://belgium.rootsweb.com/_br/team/pr.html

http://www.scientificproofreading.com/

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http://www.perfectediting.com/newsletter.asp

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