A few days ago
Anonymous

I need help with rewriting/fixing /wording of this thesis statement PLEASE??????/?

“Throughout my junior high years, i have not had very much motivation, but now that i met my best freind heather, i am an overall better person.”

So yeah, that sounds horrible but i just can’t get it out right. And the sad part is this is college writing. I’m so sad….

If you have any ideas, please let me know…THANKS!!!!

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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“Though I lacked motivation during my junior high years, I became a better person when I met my best friend Heather.”
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