A few days ago
How would you write this sentance?
I was immediatly greeted in an upbeat and friendly manner as I entered the restaurant.
or
I was immediatly greeted, in an upbeat and friendly manner, as I entered the restaurant.
I am only interested in what the proper way is. Thank you much!
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The first one is correct. It is a complete sentence and has no need for commas.
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A few days ago
First of all, don’t forget to spell check… Immediately… The first sentence posted is just fine. There are too many commas in the second sentence.
I was immediately greeted in an upbeat and friendly manner as I entered the restaurant. = Correct!
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A few days ago
As I entered the restaurant, I was immediately greeted in an upbeat and friendly manner.
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A few days ago
As I entered the restaurant I was immediately greeted in an upbeat and friendly manner.
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A few days ago
I think it should be neither.It should be:I was greeted immediately in an upbeat and friendly manner as I entered the restaurant.
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