How would you write this sentance?

I was immediatly greeted in an upbeat and friendly manner as I entered the restaurant.

I was immediatly greeted, in an upbeat and friendly manner, as I entered the restaurant.

I am only interested in what the proper way is. Thank you much!

Top 5 Answers

A few days ago

Teresa S

Favorite Answer

The first one is correct. It is a complete sentence and has no need for commas.

A few days ago

trp2007

First of all, don’t forget to spell check… Immediately… The first sentence posted is just fine. There are too many commas in the second sentence.

I was immediately greeted in an upbeat and friendly manner as I entered the restaurant. = Correct!

A few days ago

C D

As I entered the restaurant, I was immediately greeted in an upbeat and friendly manner.

A few days ago

Stuck in the middle of nowhere

As I entered the restaurant I was immediately greeted in an upbeat and friendly manner.

A few days ago

nweiheng

I think it should be neither.It should be:I was greeted immediately in an upbeat and friendly manner as I entered the restaurant.

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