A few days ago
Anonymous

What do you think of this ending paragraph?

Is it even considered an ending paragraph? I was having a hard time with it so it would be great if you gave me some suggestions and shared some thoughts. Oh and the essay I wrote is a book report on which character I like and why I admire the qualities the character holds. Thanks!

Concluding paragraph:

So you see, Flora would make the best friend because she has the best qualities of a friend a person can want. She is the type of person that can make a friendship last a lifetime. What else would a person want in a friend? Flora and I would get along very well, because we are alike.

what do you think? I will choose a best answer!

Top 3 Answers
A few days ago
wintennis91

Favorite Answer

it doesn’t follow the format of righting a persuasive essay and it is simple. you may want to spice i up a bit but make sure to follow the format!!!!
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A few days ago
yyyyyy
IMHO, it’s nice but a little repetitive

I think it would be improved if you START the paragraph with your last sentence, and go from there.

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A few days ago
lololololololololol
Pretty Good
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