As indicated in my Personal History Profile, I have a Bachelor of Arts in Political Science and a minor in Geography. I completed an undergraduate degree in 3 years from Edinboro University of Pennsylvania (2003-2006). In addition to studying, I participated in many extracurricular activities; Vice President of the Asian Club; Coordinator of an educational trip to Harvard University and the Massachusetts Institute of Technology; and Hostess of my university where the honorable guest speaker was the First Secretary of the Consulate General of Japan in New York.

In the summer of 2005, I had a great opportunity to intern at the Royal Thai Embassy in Washington D.C. I was assigned to assist The Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission in Public and International Affairs. My primary duty was to verify official documents such as Passport, Visa, Naturalization, and Legalization.

At the present time, I am a full-time graduate student at Bowie State University pursuing a Master of Public Administration and a graduate assistant in the department of Management, Marketing, and Public Administration. My responsibilities include assisting the long-term projects with the department; managing the department career and internship opportunities; managing graduate student’s official files and documents; conducting research for MBA program coordinator; developing and updating the department website; and broadcasting information and scheduling courses on the university databases. In addition, I attend many professional development training including the Peoplesoft database training, website development training, OSDBU Procurement Conference, Faculty Research and the Scholarship Training Series.

Outside of academic studies, I have been working as a part-time employee of Sodexho USA for over 3 years (2004-2007). I enjoy providing quality customer service to faculty, staff, students, and communities. I rank very highly among the team for excellence in customer services.

These experiences have given me an opportunity to effectively practice my skills in

planning, researching, decision-making, team and systematic working, communication, and organizational skills. I am a hard worker who is highly motivated and dedicated to accomplish tasks efficiently.

As indicated in the Personal History Profile, I have my Bachelor of Arts in Political Science and minor in Geography. I completed my undergraduate degree in 3 years from Edinboro University of Pennsylvania (2003-2006). In addition to studying, I participated in extracurricular activities(,) Vice President of the Asian Club (and) Coordinator of (an) education related trip to Harvard University and the Massachusetts Institute of Technology(. I was also ) Hostess (from) my university (to our) guest (the honorable) First Secretary of the Consulate General of Japan in New York.

In the summer of 2005, I had a great opportunity to intern at the Royal Thai Embassy in Washington D.C. I was assigned to assist The Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission in Public.

……I have put my suggestions in parenthesis. Does this still retain your meaning? I was confused about the “honorably”.

I think you meant it like a polite reference…. the gentleman…………. also you use semicolons in the fourth paragraph (that I did not copy) between items in a list. The first semicolon should be a colon, to show that a list will follow. The items in the list should just be separated by a comma.

Good luck.

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