A few days ago
Mizzy

Is this a proper sentance?

Is this sentance a run-on? 😛

However, it was not until one of my elementary art teachers, a corpulent young man with a warm smile, sketched just for me a drawing of a semi-realistic kitten that I began to take the progression of my artistic skills seriously.

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A few days ago
angelite16

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you need to add a couple commas;

after sketched, and just for me and after kitten

However, it was not until one of my elementary art teachers, a corpulent young man with a warm smile, sketched, just for me, a drawing of a semi-realistic kitten, that I began to take the progression of my art skills seriously.

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A few days ago
Camille
no, the commas help give you a time to breathe as you are reading it
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A few days ago
Sarah C
Either way above could work, but you need to work on spelling.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
No, it’s just fine.
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A few days ago
Adorabile
Yes, is a proper S-E-N-T-E-N-C-E.
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