A few days ago
Anonymous

Grammar/ Spelling check, please!?

I have a teacher who is obsessed with spelling. Anyways, after getting a 98 on a lab for missing a comma, I am asking to see if anyone can proof read the following sentences. Thanks!

My hypothesis is that a penny will have slightly less mass if it is older. I think so because items tend to wear down as they age. If a penny wears down, it’s mass will decrease.

Age does not affect the mass of penny.

I think that the older and new coins may be made of different metals which would affect their mass.

All coins probably will be affected the same way a penny will be. I think that age will have little effect on the mass of a nickel, dime, or quarter.

My histogram shows that there were a few stray pennies amongst the most popular masses, 2.5 g and 3.1 g. It also identified the two main masses.

In 1982 the penny’s composition was changed. The penny changed from being made from 95% copper and 5% zinc to about 98% zinc and 2% copper. This switch of materials changed the mass of the penny.

Top 6 Answers
A few days ago
old lady
Last sentence in paragraph 1 – its, not it’s.

But this is very confusing. In one paragraph you say your hypothesis is that a penny will have slightly less mass if it is older.

The next paragraph you say age does not affect the mass of the penny.

Which is it?

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A few days ago
Melissa P
1. The updated sentence reads “then newer ones”–should be “than,” not “then.”

2. The second line, “it’s mass will decrease” should be “its” not “it’s”

3. line 3, “the mass of penny” should read “the mass of a penny” or “the mass of pennies”

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4 years ago
Anonymous
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A few days ago
Jake
It seems fine, but I’m only in 7th grade (and yes, i know what a hypothesis and Histogram are)
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A few days ago
The Waffle
it’s should be its

may into might, made of into made up of

masses, into masses:

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