A few days ago
Anonymous

essay help plz!!?

I have to write a 5 paragraph essay on “Why I would Never have a pet cheetah” My three reasons are that they would be hard to take care of, hard to locate, and they are dangerous animals. I have different details for each one and subtopics under that but I need some help with the introduction of the paragraph. I know what to put as my thesis but I need help with the first sentence which should be the broad general statement and the following sentences before the acual thesis. Any ideas i rele would appreciate them

Top 8 Answers
A few days ago
Anonymous

Favorite Answer

Not all cats are good pets.

There are many things to consider before getting a pet.

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A few days ago
weilongli2003
Thesis = Owning a Cheetah is a very bad idea because they are hard to take care of, hard to locate, and are very dangerous.

Opening = Why is owning a cheetah bad?

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A few days ago
coralee333
Always start with an introduction that is an overview of what you will be stating in the next three paragraphs, the fifth will be your conclusion. Hope this helps
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A few days ago
lil_blue
start off by talking about having a pet.. and be like one animal that i would never own is a cheetah.. cheetahs are this and that, blah blah, and that’s why it’s not a good idea to have one as a pet
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A few days ago
LeeEyeLa
Try this for each topic sentence: start one with a question, one with a statement, and one with an exclamation (staying with the general idea of a TOPIC sentence) This should bring some variety to your paper. ^_^
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A few days ago
Anonymous
just write your thesis and the rest of the essay, then write the into adn conclusion when you haev the whole essay in frotn of you

then you know what ur introducing

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A few days ago
Anonymous
ITS STUPID READ MORE READ READ
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A few days ago
Anonymous
wut about if they ran away you would never catch them lol
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