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If you received $100,000 from your uncle, what would you do with the money? You can either buy a luxury car or travel to other countries. If I obtained $100,000 from a relative, I would split it into three parts: one part for contributing to charity, another part for spending on my needs, and the other part for spending on items I want. In other words, I would use the money without wasting penny.
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“If I obtained” sounds very strained. How about saying, “If a relative gave me $100,000 etc.etc.
How about listing some of the items you would buy with the $33,000 you are splurging with? And you can’t really say that is ‘without wasting a penny’ because you have already said that one third of the money would go for your needs, so the stuff you want is obviously things that aren’t actually necessary.
You could end up by saying “However, as I don’t seem to have any relatives willing to give me $100,000 at the moment, I’ll just have to concentrate on doing my homework, graduating, and getting a job that will let me make my dreams come true.
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