A few days ago
Anonymous

Can you edit my grammar?

You are welcome. I am glad I did this for you and your class.

That sounds wonderful opportunity to travel with you. Can I think about it and let you to know when you come back from New York? I have been praying for you. I know God will use you in great ways and shine your life for other people in New York. I admire you in different ways. Smile… I hope I will hear some stories about your experienced from this weekend.

Have a Wonderful Weekend…

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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Hmm…

You’re welcome. I’m more than happy to have done this for you and your class. It would be wonderful to have the opportunity to travel with you. Can I think about it and let you know when you return from New York? I’ve been praying for you, I know God has great things in store for you and the people around you. I really think you have many admirable qualities. I’m hoping to hear some stories about your experiences over the weekend. Have a wonderful weekend!

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A few days ago
Anonymous
You’re welcome. I’m glad I did this for you and your class.

That sounds like a wonderful opportunity, to travel with you. Can I think about it and let you know when you come back from New York? I have been praying for you. I know God will use you in great ways and shine on your life for other people in New York. I admire you in different ways. Smile… I hope I will hear some stories about your experience from this weekend.

Have a wonderful weekend…

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A few days ago
nameless
You are welcome. I am glad I did this for you and your class.

That sounds like a wonderful opportunity to travel with you. Can I think about it and let you know when you come back from New York? I have been praying for you. I know God will use you in great ways and shine your life for other people in New York. I admire you in different ways. Smile… I hope I will hear some stories about your experiences from this weekend.

Have a Wonderful Weekend…

Ok I fixed some small things but I don’t understand “and shine your life for other people in New York” so I didn’t change it, but it doesn’t really make sense.

Do you mean “shine in your life” or something?

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A few days ago
jeny g
1. You’re welcome.

2. It was my pleasure doing this for you and your class.

3. Thank you for inviting me but I really can’t for now.

4. Can I think about it? I’ll let you know as soon as you come back from New York.

5. I will be praying for you.

6. You are an instrument of God and I know you will do great things there in New York.

7. You are a good person and I admire you for that.

8. Tell me stories of your travel when you get back.

9. Have a wonderful weekend.

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A few days ago
gr8ful_one
You’re welcome. I’m glad I did this for you and your classmates.

That sounds LIKE A wonderful opportunity to travel with you.

I have been praying for you. I know you will do great things in your life. In many ways, I admire you. I can’t wait to hear about your experiences from this weekend.

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A few days ago
Jennifer
That sounds LIKE A wonderful opportunitu to travel with you.

I know God will use you in great ways and shine ON your life for other people in New York (TO SEE?)

or

I know God will use you in great ways and shine ON your life AND THE LIVES OF other people in New York.

I hope i will hear some stories about your EXPERIENCES from this weekend.

hope this helps, :).

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A few days ago
melissa908
Hmmmm, what you just wrote didn’t make that much sense. So it would be hard to correct it. The grammar isn’t as bad as the way things are worded. That sounds wonderful opportunity to travel with you” You see that part (among other sentences don’t make sense. Since I don’t really know what you’re trying to say, it would be hard to correct it.
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