A few days ago
whazzup451

Sentence grammer explination?

In the sentence: Long distance swimmers coat their body with grease not to keep to keep tehmselves warm, (this is a common belief) but to lessen water resistance…

A. (stay the same)

B. (despite a common belief)

C. (which is what the common belief is)

D. (which was commonly believed so)

E. (as is commonly believed)

Why is the answer E? What rule makes it that? And why are all the others not right?

Top 3 Answers
A few days ago
maî

Favorite Answer

This is more of a style issue than a grammar issue.

The sentence “this is a common belief” is a complete sentence interjected in front of a dependent clause.

While using parenthesis is not precisely wrong-it could just have easily been set off by hyphens as in this sentence-but it is still awkward. Changing the sentence to be a phrase rather than an independent (or dependent clause, for that matter) follows a rule of word economy. Why use more words when you can use fewer?

Furthermore, if you look at your choices, you are really being asked to choose which bests fits the meaning: despite/which is/which was/as is

B. Despite is not correct because it is does not directly contradict anything.

C.Which is is wordy

D.Which was is not only past tense but adds an extra (unnecessary) coordinating conjunction

E. As is commonly believed… is present tense like the rest of the sentence plus it simply fits the meaning best.

However, I would like to point out, as a former long distance swimmer, it really does help keep your body warmer.

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4 years ago
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neither is right. you have what’s suggested as a comma splice in the 2d sentence. in case you replace the comma with a semicolon, this is going to be terrific. the 1st sentence might wish a pronoun. i might use “which” in case you go with to maintain the comma. So it might say, “She is waiting for her miracle, that’s taking constantly!” although, few people communicate like that.
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A few days ago
GoingNoWhereFast
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