Both Hamlet and Macbeth by William Shakespeare fall into the genre of tragedy. The play Macbeth has some tragic events in, but it seems to all be buried by having a happy ending. Macbeth followed the genre of tragedy well, but it failed to follow it through all the way to the end. However, Hamlet was very successful in following the genre of tragedy all the way through. The ending of the play Hamlet is dark and bloody which gives the audience the depressing view. The ending of Hamlet was very well fitted to the genre and managed to deliver the tragic event of the play to the audience by expressing the tragedy in detail.

This is how I would say it, there were a couple of places I wasn’t quite sure what you were trying to say so I hope I got it right! I tried to stick to your basic wording.

Both Hamlet and Macbeth (italicize play titles) by William Shakespeare falls (Both fall not falls) in to the genre of tragedy. The play Macbeth has some tragic events in the play, but the play buries all the tragedy by having a happy ending. Macbeth was following the genre of tragedy well, but it’s (it)failed to follow all the way to the end. However, Hamlet was very successful in following the genre of tragedy. The ending of the play Hamlet is dark and bloody which gives audience the depressing view. The play’s conclusion was very well fitted with the genre and expressed in detail the tragic event of the play to the audience. Where’s the thesis?

Why are you giving support for your points in the intro? the intro should introduce the concepts. The body should support the thesis. Macbeth is a tragedy because the main character dies.