which university are u opting for? i can give u contact info of friends at AKU and DMC (Karachi) who might be able to help u out!

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or u cud use something like this…

Eighteen years of life have taught me many harsh lessons and made me realize that there are people who still lack proper medical care. Becoming a doctor I think I can make a difference in today’s society. I feel that I can bring relief to people around me with the knowledge that I gather here at Blah Blah University. I consider myself as a compassionate person with a will to help those in need and this in essence serves as my motivation to become a doctor and serve people as a service to the needy.

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