A few days ago
babysteaks3

Help what is wrong with this sentence?

My Grandma was a “do it all” woman, who rasied my Dad and his siblings as a single mom with a full time job as a nurse.

I got marked for diction and tense change between who and raised.

I am not sure what I need to change or why.

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A few days ago
fangtaiyang

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My grandmother was a “do it all” type of woman. As a single mother, she managed to raise my father and his siblings while working full-time as a nurse.
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A few days ago
Jenn B
My grandma was a “do it all” woman, raising my dad and his siblings as a single mom while simultaneously working as a nurse full time.
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A few days ago
barb j
My Grandma was a “do-it-all” woman who simultaneously raised my dad and his siblings singlehandedly while working full time as a nurse.
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