im having a hard time starting mine..sort of having writer’s block. i already made my ending. can u tell me how u like it? if there’s something wrong with it..suggestions are welcome!

As a result of my efforts I have been able to experience the joy of breaking through the tape of a finish line, excelling in math and science, being part of copious music events, and seeing the smiles of my parents and teachers cheering me on. I am positive that [xxx my desired high school] can push my limits farther, bring out the best I can be, and most of all – prepare me for the real world. I know that by consistently working towards my goals – however difficult they may seem – I can accomplish what I set for myself, both in and beyond high school.

i spent a little while on this. i hope its good.