A few days ago
is this a good hook for my paper?
The story of an inspirational struggle for individuality demonstrates the power of love in all Americans.
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Well my english teacher tells us to use one of these 5 story openers:
-Question; State and answer a question
-Anecdote; A short story relating to the subject but not quite giving it away until the end of the introduction
– Interesting Fact; An statistic that is not commonly known
-Quote; A quote relating to the subject
-Analogy; Making a comparison relating to the subject
Hope this helps! Good Luck!
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A few days ago
Is the struggle inspirational or is the story? Perhaps it should be ” An inspirational story of the struggle for individuality and the power of love (with or without the in all Americans part).
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A few days ago
Maybe just a little change. Suppose you are talking about John Smith. Say something like:
John Smith’s inspriational struggle to maintain his individuality demonstrates the tremendous power of love.
You might want to relate it to all Americans in your next sentence, but keep your “hook” sentence shorter to make it more powerful.
Best of luck with it.
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