A few days ago
Jessiexxlove

Does this Quote make sense?

I made up this quote, honestly does it make sense. Or is it just plain old stupid?

“Just walk across the room, its only a few steps. It could change our life. Talk to me, im waiting on the otherside. Standing against this wall. Ignore your friends. I love you. Just take the steps, walk across the room.

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A few days ago
rumbledrum

Favorite Answer

Hello;

Well – I wouldn’t call it a quote. A quote is when you repeat *exactly* the words of another person. What I might call it would be a poem, a lyric or perhaps the start of a monologue.

“Just walk across the room; it’s only a few steps. It could change our lives. Talk to me, I’m waiting on the other side. Standing against this wall. Ignore your friends. I love you. Just take the steps, walk across the room.”

Is it stupid? Absolutely not. In fact, I would say it is both telling an endearing.

Keep up the good work and never stop writing as it is one of the few things that is completely yours to control.

Enjoy!

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5 years ago
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I think it does, but it takes some real thinking. To me it’s saying, take one day from your past that was the best. The day you thought would never be topped again. The quote is then saying how that day, will be the worst day. In the future, you WILL have a day that is better and more memorable then your previous “favorite” This new favorite day, will make the old one look like the worst day you ever had. Basically, it means, “the best is yet to come”
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A few days ago
open4one
If you work on it some, that’ll make a nice poem. I wouldn’t change the words, just organize it into lines, rather than as a paragraph.
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A few days ago
storesboy
more like a poem than a quote
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A few days ago
AnswerMachine
it does makes sense, but why do you want this as a quote??

perhaps you should consider this more as poem?

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A few days ago
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Yes

To me it mean’s the person talking saying “come to me” want’s the viewer to go out with him or something like that.

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A few days ago
Rakas
Honestly, it doesn’t make sense. Much better to rephrase.
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A few days ago
Tooz
doesn’t sound like a ‘quote’,…more like song lyrics
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