A few days ago
Anonymous

captain speech for school?

i am i yr 8 and this in my spech for captaiin next year – ia m prfroming to morrow so feedback asap plz..

INTRODUCTION

Hi, my name is Charlotte and I have been at Pedare since year 6 and I am here to support the Hillcott community.

WHY WOULD I BE A GOOD CAPTAIN?

I believe that I would be a good captain because I am approachable, I am easy to talk to, ill be happy to listen to anyone and I will consider all ideas and suggestions and I want to represent the best community at Pedare, HILLCOTT.

WHY AM I GOING FOR CAPTIN?

I am going for captain because I love being part of the Hillcott community and I want to support Hillcott in the position of captain as much I can.

WHAT SKILLS DO I HAVE?

I am hard worker, I can work in teams, I am good speaker and I understand that being middle school captain will take up my own time and i am happy to do that.

PARTCIPANT IN…?

I have participated in many community events such as sports days and swimming carnivals. I also have represente

Top 5 Answers
A few days ago
yeahyeahyeah

Favorite Answer

that is a good start to the speech, it sounds a little too simple though and under guidelines.

maybe you should add some more complex vocab to make your speech sound.. more.. smart and sophisticated.

add some phrases which will grab the audiences attention. the start is too much commonly heard.

also add some points about why are you different to the other people who want to be captain? what you will do differently to them and what you have which they dont.

hope that helps 🙂 good luck!

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5 years ago
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whats a school captain.. like a basketball team?
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A few days ago
Anonymous
Little girl, this is your parents job not some random person on the internet. Also, I would highly advice you not to post personal info like what school you attend. Go fetch your parents.
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A few days ago
frnz
the speech is gud………

i think u can include more pts in the second topic

u can also use moer vocabulary so that u gain attention.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
Thats a good speach!

i’m not sure what you want us to comment on.

but good luck!

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