I will begin tonight with news of a race last evening between Hallie Johnson & Brian Appleford.They raced in high speed until screeching brakes brought them to their senses. Fortunately, nothing serious happened & no one was hurt. Each did get a well deserved ticket from the police. Although kids know this is a wrong thing to do, they often do it because unfortunately excitement means more to them than endangering lives.

Johnson nor Appleford were injured. Police have no motive for the incident and cite the race as just some kids blowing off steam through a dangerous activity

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They raced at “high speeds” for about ten minutes down to Candy Street.

At the end, they still get a ticket from the police.

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In the end, they still got a ticket from the police.

Sometime

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Sometimes

Many people died of it

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Many people have died from it.