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As the sea leaped above the crystal clear blue sky I knew I’d ridden off all my woes,
The sun was now a blazing red, fierce, fiery and ferocious as the sombre lion,
And the tall leafy palm trees were looking down on me, protecting beach Hawaiian,
As I lay down, I was in a world of my own, trapped from all ‘reality’
I listened to the wooshing sounds of the waves and the gleaming sky was all I could see
Shells – Tiny droplets of heaven were scattered everywhere
Some as soft and smooth as a giant teddy bear,
Following the sea was like walking around the world and back and it’s waves were never-ending
They kept splashing onto the golden ground below and never decending,
As they day grew darker, the tide grew higher, gathering as much sand as it could,
All the memories I had at the paradice from child to adulthood,
I never saw that beach again, Never saw the sky gleam so bright, the waves blast onto the golden ground,
Never again did I see that sight.
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