No, it doesn’t sound too formal, but it also doesn’t sound very interesting. Sorry : ) Try to single out one memory that really stands out in your head. Something funny or interesting or amazing. Do you play sports? Was there an incredible win you can remember that your team had? Was there a dance you went to that was especially fun? Was there a funny day at school that will stand out in your head forever? I don’t want you to think I’m being rude. It’s not my intention at all, but I do hope you choose something more specific. Your response sounds very canned and will probably be used by half of your class anyway. Be creative. Be original. Put some thought into it. The perfect memory will come to you eventually. Good luck!

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