Well it’s a paragraph that has so many mistakes and I have to rewrite it in a better and a more creative way. I chamged so many stuff in it but I think it probably still have some mistakes. So can you please tell me if you can find something wrong or just rewrite it in a better and a more formal way.

It’s like that now: This is a proof of enrollment to establish that X has only one semester left for her X certificate and that she has been enrolled at our school, X School, for the Spring Semester 2008 starting January 30th and ending May 26th. She will have her certificate once she has passed the final exams in May 2008.

I replaces the names with X

Thaks in advance!