A few days ago
I need help to re-emphasize my thesis statement please?
This is my thesis statement:
“Jessica and Carlos are two characters with different stories which their parents shaped them emotionally from becoming who they are.”
How can I re-emphasize? Any ideas or opinions would be fine.
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A few days ago
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You have two separate thoughts. “Jessica and Carlos are two characters with different stories” is one thought. “Their parents shaped them emotionally” is the other. The “from becoming who they are” is unclear. Did their parents prevent them from becoming who they are? Or cause them to become who they are?
Instead of trying to put all of these thoughts into one sentence, break it up and use more sentences.
“Jessica and Carlos are two characters with different stories. Their parents shaped them emotionally. This caused them to become XXX”
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4 years ago
Re-emphasize
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A few days ago
Jessica and Carlos – Two different tales of how emotional shaping by parents can prevent children from realizing their true potential.
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A few days ago
“Jessica and Carlos are two characters with different stories, and their parents helped shape them emotionally into becoming who they are.” I think it sounds better this way.
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A few days ago
Despite the different backgrounds of the characters Jessica and Carlos, it is clear that their parents significantly influenced both of them in their upbringing.
AVR your contribution was not a sentance.
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5 years ago
that is debatable and there are in fact several answers to the question…
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