A few days ago
MzChamillinator

How to write a intro paragraph??

Its going to be about me and how i can relate myself to koala bears. I have info on what to put in the body of the essay. but not sure how to start.

All i have is a sentence I kno i have to put at the end of the intro paragraph..

A few ways I can relate to koala bears is by the color of their fur, their maternal habits, and how they are becoming extinct.

Any suggestions..any help is really appreciated

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A few days ago
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You can start it out by saying something interesting like what does a person and a koala bear have in common?
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A few days ago
cc
OK-First, are you furry, extinct or maternal? Hmmm..

How about,” After I shave my legs, you would think I had as much fur as a Koala!.

While I know the human race is not becoming extinct, I know that I am a unique person and that there will be another ME . This ties in with maternalism, because people have children , (mothers being considered ‘maternal’) which prevents extinction of our race. However, after the way I see some children behave, I may decide not to have children. If everyone felt this way, our race could become extinct. THE BIG DIFFERENCE IS: The koalas have no choice.

Then lead in to your essay…..

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A few days ago
d1denney
A good standard formula for any paper or report…or letter….

“Tell ’em what you’re going to tell ’em, Tell ’em, tell ’em what you told ’em”

For an intro (it is “an”, not “a” BTW….), try starting out like:

In this paper I will relate how the koala bear and I have similarities and also differences. It will also discuss X and Y. In addition…..

The intro doesn’t have to be especially long, but you do want to keep the reader interested!

Good luck. You can also relate to the koala bears by saying you’re cuddly….but that may be overdoing it! πŸ™‚

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A few days ago
Anonymous
You could say something about how people might be surprised to find out that you have a lot in common with a koala bear.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
scene is better than summary. so start with something direct and intriguing. eg. “the morning sun warmed her fur, which glittered with a million drops of dew. Slowly she brings her head out from where it has been tucked in away from the freezing hight time air. Her powerful claws reach out to bring a twig closer to her pursed pink mouth. Ah, delicious! The first minty crunch of gum tree leaves!

Such a scene is played out thousands of times across Australia daily. But once it happened millions of times every morning. For the last few million years. No longer. The koala, cute bear-like marsupial that aprt from the kangaroo is the most recognisable symbol of Australia, is on the verge on extinction.” etc, etc.

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