hilarious joke!!?

lol this isnt a joke, but all i want to know is this…

which of these sentences makes more sense or sounds the best?

1. It also affects people who are like john and have a family member who have gone into war.

2. It also affects people who are like john and have a family member who is fighting in the war.

3. It also affects people who are like john and have a family member who is overseas fighting in World World II.

also, is there any other suggestions you could give me on what to change in the sentence?

Top 3 Answers

A few days ago

Anonymous

Favorite Answer

If you want to be specific use:

It also affects people like john who have a family member overseas fighting in World World II.

Less specific:

It also affects people like john who have a family member fighting in the war.

A few days ago

misanthropic_cynic

It also affects people like John, who has a family member fighting in the war.

A few days ago

starprincessaries

It also affects people who are like john and have a family memeber who is overseas fighting in World World II.

OR (my own verson of the sentence)

It also affects people who, like John, have a family member who is overseas fighting in World War II.

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