A few days ago
Anonymous

What would be a good thesis statement for this paper?

I have to write a paper on the Democracy in America Today and how religion has affected it. I

have the “meat” of the paper which is primarily about how goverment allows the freedom of religion due to the first amendment which states, “Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free excercis thereof…”

I just need to begin the paper with a thesis statement that is strong, since this is a pursuasive writing assignment.

I am trying to pursuade that religion is indeed a part of government today. Religion is mentioned in the U.S. Constitution, “In God We Trust” is inscripted on coins, “One nation under God…” is stated in the pledge of alligence, etc.

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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Possible thesis statement: “One Nation Under God” is more than a slogan; it’s the foundation of our government today.

Another possibility: Despite the separation of church and state, religious thought permeates every aspect of American government.

Third possibility: In granting freedom of religion, the writers of the Constitution ensured that religion would play an important role in American government.

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A few days ago
epaphras_faith
From your own words:

“religion is indeed a part of government today”

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