A few days ago
mikhailb89

Topic sentence for an essay?

I have to write an essay, describing one of my friend’s characteristics. I chose “hardworking”. Does anyone have any ideas how to start off this essay other than “my friend Jim is the most hardworking person I know”. Please send in your ideas I’ll greatly appreciate them.

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A few days ago
Soccer Girl ♥

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dunno thatz a tuff topic!
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A few days ago
Anonymous
I would start by saying what hardworking means, like:

To be hardworking is a great characteristic to have. It means you apply yourself and try hard at every opportunity, even if the going is tough. It means you persevere through moments when you struggle and never give up on a task, however difficult it may be. You work hard at everything, which gives you a better outlook and attitude towards life and people, and improves your personality. I find the characteristic of hardworking especially applies to my friend Jim.. ect.

Then you could write examples of why he is hardwrking and what you feel about that. Hope this helps.

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A few days ago
bookgirl
My friend Jim is the embodiment of a hardworking individual and I believe that this is one of the most important traits that a person can posess.
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A few days ago
peaches_bd
When one hears Jim and “hardworking” in the same sentence it is wise to remind yourself that “hardworking” and and “hard work” do not bear the same attributes in definition. While Jim is indeed hardworking, he does not necessarily do hard work.
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A few days ago
First L
Start off by defining what hardworking is. Something like this might help.” Hardworking is defined as characterized by hard work and perseverance. Well I say it is defined as my friend (insert name).”
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A few days ago
Anonymous
I’d start it off like a story, as if this were a feature in the newspaper about your friend. For example:

I ran into my friend Jim yesterday. He was friendly, as always, but he told me he only had a minute.

“Jake, great to see you,” he said, shaking my hand. “Just gotta minute, though. I have to be at work in 5 minutes.” He looked at his watch.

“Didn’t you just get off work?” I asked, puzzled.

“Yeah, but that’s the gas station. I’m on my way to my other job now, at the car wash.” And he shook my hand again and took off.

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5 years ago
arianne
As rape and other violent sexual crimes become the number 3 top rising crime its time we reassess are laws and put a life sentence on such people who dergitize vulnerable people.
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A few days ago
J3NN
a topic sentence must be ONLY one sentence…go with bookgirl’s answer.
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A few days ago
guitar_girl4ever
Diligence is one thing i know Tim mostly is. He is diligent in everything he does………………………..
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