Please revise this paragraph plz change the sentences make them flow?
if you change sentences around and make them more flow then ill give you 10pts.
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[Read John 10:27-30] Jesus spokeof his followers being his sheep. (Explain why they’re like his sheep, because to the reader, this is unclear). Because Jesus is no longer present in our everyday lives as our friends and our parents are we don’t think of him or go to him the same way. Like our parents do, Jesus will always love us no matter what mistakes we make. For example, not going to church every Sunday is bad, but he will always hold on to us and nothing can be bad enough to take us away from his love. If we lose the relationships, Jesus is always there for us to turn to. What we don’t think about is, he wants us to be prosperous in our lives and he wants to keep us safe. He will always be there for us and love us. Jesus is always watching.
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