A few days ago
Anonymous

Need help on written article?

Hello, as a reporter for a school club I was requested to write up an article that would be submitted into the school paper. Since there is a chance that this will be in the school’s paper, I would prefer that it was well written. I was wondering if I could get some opinions, and please note, I am a high school student, not a professional journalist.

Future Business Leaders of America (FBLA) surrounded themselves with the pines of Prescott, Arizona as they attended the annual Chapter Officer Training on the 24th, and 25th of September . For those who aren’t familiar with FBLA, it’s a 70 year old organization that is devoted to giving students the skills that’s use is not only limited to a business field, but to any career, and even every day life. While in Prescott they partook in various team building games, activities, and workshops, that they can put to use in their weekly chapter meetings. They also got the opportunity to listen to professional speakers, such as Kelly Barnes, wh

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A few days ago
debbie f

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I would chnge partook to took part. I think it looks good no better than good for a high school student. Just change that one word because it makes the sentence slow down.
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