A few days ago
California<3

hey guys for homework i need to write a poem on something important to me?

i am writing on my grandma that passed away this is only my first draft how can i perfect it?

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From day one

I knew she was the one

The times we shared

I was not prepared

I was just five years old

when she left us cold

My father tells me stories

how you were an angel (the sweetest person evr)

The gold color eyes you left for me

As i look at pictures im torn up inside

but i always keep them to hide

I know your in heaven and wouldnt want me to be sad

your son is left designated best dad

you would be so proud if you were here

to see us bloom, reach our goals and cheer

you gave me a golden necklace which reminds me of you

its unique and shaped as a shoe

OK so she also called us every sunday and sent amazing chocolate and barbies in the mail i want to say like ” I miss those calls Etc. but i need help!!!! PLEASE

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A few days ago
Rlena

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hhuumm lets see…

I really miss your calls

and the barbies you would send

When you left this world

I lost my best friend

The rest looks really good to me. =)

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