A few days ago
carmenclassof06

Help with editing!!!! 10pts best answer!!!!!!!!!!?

I always have trouble with writing…how can i make this paragraph stronger…what words can use that would make a huge difference?? what can i add to make it longer? any suggestions or examples would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!

As a student in your class I always found myself needing answers to questions in order to solidify my thought before the new class session would begin. Having set office hours allowed me to do that. I was able to come to you when I needed help…

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A few days ago
ashley

Favorite Answer

you could put a lot of details in it! Totally!
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A few days ago
Anonymous
Stronger writing uses stronger verbs.

Use an active not a passive voice.

Use details, but don’t get wordy.

Use correct punctuation to make your writing clear.

A few (certainly not comprehensive) suggestions:

As a student in your class, I often needed to clarify questions arising from one week’s lesson before the next class session would begin. Because you had set office hours, I was able to come to you when I needed help…

Now explain the teacher’s reaction to frequent requests for help and how the help made a difference.

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A few days ago
nj
1. Use the thesaurus in Microsoft word. Right click the word you want a synonym for. It makes you sound smart.

2. Look over your paper a couple times to change little things you see at a second glance.

2. Have a friend (or two or three) edit your paper.

3. Have another teacher edit your paper.

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A few days ago
Angela C
As a student in your class, [name class here], I always [often] found myself needing answers to questions in order to solidify my thought [in order to better understand the material] before the new class session. [For example, when I needed help with ….., and also when I needed to better understand…..] Having set office hours allowed me to do that [this]. I was able to come to you when I needed help…[I really appreciated knowing when and where help was available. I liked the way you………, and I enjoyed the fact that your office was…….]
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