A few days ago
courtney t

What is a good thesis sentence?

What is a good thesis statement example for a 7th grade critical writing essay? Please no jokes just tell me. i can’t find anything online that is for my level.

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A few days ago
chris

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On a seventh grade level a thesis statement in an essay should be a sentence in the beginning of the paragraph that sums up what you will be writing about. Trust me on this one, your teachers aren’t expecting a college level thesis.
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A few days ago
navy_bison
A thesis statement in 7th grade? Holy cow.

Anyways, the thesis is the main idea or your claim in the essay. If you are really into English structure and so forth, look up Toulmin’s Model online (Yahoo or Google it) and also remember the syllogism that Socrates created as:

Main Claim: All Men are mortal

Second Claim: Socrates is a man

Therefore, Socrates is mortal

Toulmin explains this in depth.

Now for an easier explaination: What point do you want to make in your essay? The answer to the question should be your thesis ex: Violent video games do not create violent people, people are violent by nature. THen follow this up with supporting ideas.

Good luck!

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A few days ago
Alan
When in doubt, turn a question around:

“What makes a A Thesis Sentence ‘Good’ ”

Following arguments should be about: quality, relevance, and the ability to summate complex ideas.

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A few days ago
myusernameisbetterthanyours
A thesis statement should be 25 words or less and it cannot be a question. It should be something that sums up your paper and something interesting to make your readers w/ to read on.
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A few days ago
Steven G
well i dont know what you’re writing about….but a good thing is that u really want to lead your viewer in. make a bold statement on the findings and information you have. For example, if writing about how good breakfast is for your grades you could do, “Skipping breakfast in the morning may not only make your stomache growl, but it may be causing you to do poor in school”
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