A few days ago
help needed!!!!?
i have to write a narrative about my personal hell. ive tried doing this for the past 4 hours and have gotten no where. My personal hell is basically when i lose to my brother. we play video games alot and i just dread losing to him. so that what im writing about. can someone help me write this using imagry(sound, sight, smell taste, touch) and 5 examples of figurative language
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A few days ago
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I dont know your age but:
How about, As a young person — winning and losing video games is much more important to me than adults. video games have become the new way to establish social status among our group of younger peers [aka “pecking order” (See chicken behavior)]
When I lose I become angry when my brother brags to our freinds and/or parents that he beat me again. My face flashes red with rage as I restrain my self from punching him so hard that my fist whistles through the air and leaves him with a painful black and blue bruise.
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A few days ago
Perhaps what’s blocking you is the topic itself? It seems a little…weak, to me.
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A few days ago
cussing,redness,sour,clenching,GIT,SWINE,TOSSER,CREEP,CHEAT!……..Also TRY PRACTICING YOURSELF!
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