A few days ago
SignsofPoetry

Can someone help me edit/revise this application question?

I have an application I need to fill out for student leadership with my youth group, and I’m unsure of my wording in this paragraph. Can anybody give me some pointers/suggestions/tips/whatever on it? Thanks a lot

Describe in one paragraph why you would like to serve in student leadership.

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A few days ago
Apolo

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well all i can suggest is as you have chosen to lead a youth group I do feel you need to be prepared to be the voice off all of them when you speak and decide on things , to be one voice for all and not just yourselfs openion so look around and get a feel for what everyone would like to see changed / improved .. get to know them and how they think , make notes so you can compose a good response to this question..

I wanted to become studant union presidant of my college at one time and I went round to as many studants as i could to get a feel off what they wanted to improve or change and what they looked for in one who would lead them and look after their best interests and voice their thoughts and I wrote everything down and i then sat and composed a small speach/flyer Vote For Me..! or in your case paragraph to show i could lead and Hay do you know what I won all off their votes and went on to lead.. it was good to be able to hold to heart and act on behalf off all and not just one..

hope this helps and maybe we can help throw in some words for your application form if and when you know these things..

But I do feel somehow when you find out all the things that your heart will help you and all you will need to do is say let it be and words will just flow into your pen..!

Love Always

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A few days ago
Elke B
You are displaying self daubt… sorry but… start again. Name your strengths

I am empathetic ,… will take advice,…. consider all opinions,…. give my utmost…..

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