A few days ago
Anonymous

is this a good thesis statment . please help?

Susan Ferraro’s essay “Name Dropper” and Lance Morrow’s essay “The Strange Burden of A Name” both approach the same issue of names. Ferraro’s essay skillfully reflects on a women’s personal dilemma to chose a last name. Were as Morrow’s essay mocks ridiculous names.

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A few days ago
hutch19712003

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It is good but a couple of changes I would do………

1. The word chose should be choose.

2. Take out “were as”. Start the last sentence with Marrow’s essay…..

Hope you get it good and you get a great grade on your paper.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
Yes, very good 🙂
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