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10. Choose the sentence that has faulty coordination.
With five seconds left in the game, Paul grabbed the ball, but Roger stole it.
Paul had hoped for a shot from center court, and, for a moment, the crowd had, too.
All players hope for such a shot, and they want that moment of victory.
However, when the team wins, the whole team wins.
11. Choose the best revision of the sentence with faulty coordination.
Mrs. Gates was studying Japanese, and she planned a visit to Japan.
Mrs. Gates was studying Japanese; however, she planned a visit to Japan.
Mrs. Gates was studying Japanese although she planned a visit to Japan.
Mrs. Gates was studying Japanese, yet she planned a visit to Japan.
Mrs. Gates was studying Japanese because she planned a visit to Japan.
11. The last one
Faulty coordination is when the sentence doesn’t even make sense with the way that it is said. It has to have two parts to it in order to be coordinated.
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