A few days ago
doublea1126

Sentence revision?

Dr. Valkman is a short, dark man who looks as if he’s beginning to get old.

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A few days ago
Gregory B

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Dr. Valkman is a short, dark, middle-aged man.
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A few days ago
Anonymous
Dr Valkman is a short, dark man who is beginning to show signs of aging.
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A few days ago
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Dr. Valkman is a short, dark man who show signs of aging.
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A few days ago
ferris2244
Revise what? What do you need done to it?
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A few days ago
teacherhelper
It sounds okay the way it is.
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