Please revise this sentence please?
I think its grammatically correct but I want to make it sound better. want to use another word in place of shown, is shown or showed right, and don’t know if I need to use “with you” but would sentence sound right without it? This sentence is in response to my boyfriend 33 responding and being understanding what is bothering me. Please revise this with right grammar even though it is probably right, thanks
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a. Undo the ‘split infinitive’ (don’t put ‘fully’ between ‘to’ and ‘be’)
b. Move the ‘with you’ to make it easier to see the association between ‘to be’ and ‘to share’ in the context of being ‘with you’
c. Bless you both — what you say here about your relationship sounds like it has the seeds of genuine caring in it.
Thank you for making me feel safe, I can be myself, share my feelings and your good for me.
or more serious… I want to be with you till end of life.
Your BF sounds like a great guy
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