A few days ago
Please edit this sentence for me?
Please tell me which choice is gramatically correct but ONLY if you know FOR SURE.
As we shared our past fears, you gradually felt closer to me. OR
As we shared our past fears, you gradually were feeling to me.
Also do u need to put a COMMA after fears? Please reply any writers or grammar people, thanks
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A few days ago
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“As we shared our past fears, I gradually felt closer to you.” You don’t know how he feels like.
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A few days ago
The correct grammatical fashion for this is:
As we shared our fears, you gradually felt closer to me. This sentence expresses two actions rolled into one.
Yes, you did right by putting a comma after fears.
The second sentence sounds incomplete and it would help if you put an adjective between “feeling” and “to.” That would complete it then.
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A few days ago
As we shared our past fears,you gradually felt closer to me.
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As we shared our past fears, you gradually felt closer to me.
Comma needed as it’s two different ideas being spoken about in one sentence.
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A few days ago
NO COMMA NECESSARY.
As we shared our past fears you gradually felt closer to me.
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A few days ago
as we shared our past fears you gradually felt closer to me. comma is optional
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A few days ago
the 1st one nd yes comma
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