A few days ago
Anonymous

Please edit this sentence?

Is thiss a complete sentence. Please revise it and want to use another word maybe for simply, but not just:

Simply keeping the lines of communication open between us.

I am telling my boyfriend something that upsets me then I am closing it that way. Please reply soon, thanks

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A few days ago
Anonymous

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No, that is a sentence fragment. Modify it with a subject or verb. You may wish to say

“We need to keep the lines of communication open between us.”

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A few days ago
OTOTW
Simply keep the lines of communication open between us.

We need to keep the lines of communication open between us.

Let’s simply keep the lines of communication open between us.

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A few days ago
gldjns
I would say: “In order to keep the lines of communication open between us, I am telling my boyfriend something that upsets me…………”
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A few days ago
Bethie123
I simply want to keep the lines of communication open between us. or We need to keep communication open…( between us is implied already by the word, “we”……)
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A few days ago
tothelextreme
“Simply by keeping the lines of communication open between us.”
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A few days ago
mxnakano
“communication (name of your guy), is an important element in relationship even in those that doesn’t have any”

because somehow i don’t get the impression you want proper grammer but a message or point passed through

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