A few days ago
need your rephrasing skills?!?!?
this paragraph really needs a lof of editing, i hope u folks can make it sound more formal
“And finally, they are a good partner, I recommend working with them again in the future,only if they have presented good ideas and if they considered improving their members and the economic situation in BS Province”
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Lastly, (name of corporation) is an excellent partner; I fully advise working with (them) again if (name of corp) has provided us with insightful ideas in addition to improving their members and the overall economic situation in the BS Province.
HOPE that helps 😛
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A few days ago
My problem is that there is hedging here. You want to work with them in the future, IF….
I really need to know what you are trying to convey in oreder to edit properly
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