is this a good story? and no im not a kid!Meow!kelli was inside becuase it was rainin.She pet her cat emo as the lightning crashed and filled the sky with neone yellow.the ghost she knew only as helena floated around asking her too many annoying questions to count.emo soon fell asleep and purred.Kelli sighed and rolled her eyes.She began to read her little black boo.Her diary the thing she loved and confided in the most – well besides her friend helena and her cat emo.she began to play with her straight black hair.she asked if helena wanted to go upstairs and look at her grandmothers old things.Kelli loved to find old photos of her parents they had pasts a quiet some time ago.She never really knew them but loved them both just the same. i havent written the rest my teacher wanted us to make up a character and a story she wants it to be very basic do you like it what could i do to make it better?