A few days ago
lalala

Is this sentence gramatically correct?

Because the vain man wanted looks more than personality, he declined when the hideous, yet charming woman asked him to dinner.

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A few days ago
Who’s sarcastic?

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It’s technically correct, but it is long. Maybe there is a way to make it two sentences or somehow shorten it.
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A few days ago
Isabel
Yes, the sentence is grammatically correct.
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A few days ago
*smartie*
yes it’s perfect to me
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