A few days ago
starfish

is this letter ok?

Dear Sir,

Passenger name – jarin khan

This booking for dxbmct supposed to be on I class but it has been done on K class it is offence

to be punished.

Therefore BDT 5000(Five thousand taka only).will be charged to your agency .

Thanking you,

Top 6 Answers
A few days ago
xanjo

Favorite Answer

Good grief, some of these answers are ridiculous! It’s very simple;

Dear Sir/Madam,

Re: Passenger Jarin Khan

The booking for Mr Khan was supposed to be in I Class, but was made in K Class in error. Your agency will be billed BDT 5,000 to rectify this mistake.

Yours sincerely,

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A few days ago
pearl956
It works, but it would be better if:

Dear Sir,

I refer to a recent booking made for passenger Jarin Khan. The booking for dxbmct was supposed to be I class, but it was made for K class. This is a punishable offense. Therefore, BDT 5000, five thousand taka, will be charged to your agency.

Sincerely,

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A few days ago
icegal007
No i don’t think this letter is right . PLease rephrase it as follows:

Dear Sir,

I am Jarin Khan , a passenger of your agency. I had booked my tickets for dxbmct for the I class, but the booking has been made in K class.

This is a very offensive action and is highly punishable.

Your company will therefore be charged BDT five thousand Rupees as a penalty fee.

thanking you,

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A few days ago
aWellWisher
It’s just OK, but better make it like-

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings!

I, Jarin Khan, regret to inform you that my booking for dxbmct was actually in !st class, but it has been done in K class.

I have been greatly inconvenienced by this negligence and it would be proper for you to pay me BDT 5000/- and BDT 500/- to aWellWisher who helped me in this regard.

Please make arrangements for payment asap.

Yours faithfully,

Jarin Khan.

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A few days ago
Anonymous
dear friend,

i guess you’d better write your letter like this:

Dear sirs,

I am Jarin Khan, a passenger of your agency. My booking for dxbmct was supposed to be on I class but unfortunately it is booked on K class.

I will owe you a great dept of gratitude if you solve this problem.

sincerely,

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A few days ago
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yeah, i guess..
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