A few days ago
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if you had this paragraph and you have to change and add more vivid verbs. wat would you do or add?

Blood was dripping from my hand to the floor like water from a waterfall. The dark red liquid was sprinkling onto the hard, shimmering marble-like floor. The sparkling floor was transforming into a pool of blood. The sound of the blood dripping was echoing through the pitch black walls.

My body was vacillating and shaking as I tried to get up and get the knife to defend myself. The knife’s handle was malleable and spongy-like substance wrapped around it. But the knifes point was razor-sharp with a sharp crystal at the point.

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A few days ago
Rikki

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I think I would use different descriptors for the knife, the blood and the person:

A rivulet of blood was flowing from my hand. It became a scarlet waterfall spilling onto the highly polished marble of the floor. I watched as the shine was obliterated. The only sound was the constant patter of drops faintly echoing off the ebony walls as my life force began to pool around me.

I began to shake violently as shock stole over my body. I knew I had to get the knife. On the third try, I got to my feet, shambling over to where it lay. The knife’s handle was malleable with the sponge-like substance that was wrapped around it. But there was no mistaking the razor sharp blade as a shaft of dim light played over the edge, illuminating the crystal point at the tip.

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